What I've learned from my first essay.

I've learn that the IB grading criteria is really tough. I must be very careful in writing. Making only a little mistake can make the content of the whole essay turn wrong, in which, my grade will be dropped greatly. I also discover that some words like "discover, proof and truth" should not be used at all. Lastly, when talking about Freud's ideas, I must use the words such as "seemed to and maybe", because without it my statements will be too strong and their meanings can completely change.